we're discussing your logo in class now, expect a whole bunch of more comments - once we figure out how to post them
hi aziz,we're in class.in contrast to my crit this past weekend, ali likes the square exclamation points better than the rounder ones.however, elissa likes the contrast of the round expoints next to the squarish knockout.most everyone here likes the bolder versions of knockout.in agreement with my comment, elissa likes the lighter one, but says, as i did that the "b" seems too round.we're sending you some screen shots of me messing around as instructed by your classmates behind me.but, a hesitation everyone seems to have is that the logo is not experimental enough.we feel we've seen it before, or at least think we've seen something like it before.how 'bout you leave this one as is for the moment and try other ideas?and fyi, elissa says she doesn't know why it has to be knockout.love.g.
we're discussing your logo in class now, expect a whole bunch of more comments - once we figure out how to post them
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in contrast to my crit this past weekend, ali likes the square exclamation points better than the rounder ones.
however, elissa likes the contrast of the round expoints next to the squarish knockout.
most everyone here likes the bolder versions of knockout.
in agreement with my comment, elissa likes the lighter one, but says, as i did that the "b" seems too round.
we're sending you some screen shots of me messing around as instructed by your classmates behind me.
but, a hesitation everyone seems to have is that the logo is not experimental enough.
we feel we've seen it before, or at least think we've seen something like it before.
how 'bout you leave this one as is for the moment and try other ideas?
and fyi, elissa says she doesn't know why it has to be knockout.
love.
g.